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Hello my fellow deviants and BBRae fans, you are about to be apart of history. For this kicks off the very first (That I'm aware of) write it better challenge, where two talented writer go head to head by picking one of the others best stories and seeing who can write it better. For my opponent I have chosen my good friend, the lovely and talented Ms. Tink. tinkerbell-rae-fan.deviantart.… I have taken her story (tinkerbell-rae-fan.deviantart.… and made it better. While she has taken mine and made it her own. It is up to you my fellow deviants Who wrote it better? Vote now, votes end mothers day.

Also off record, Thank you Tink for being such a great sport and an amazing writer but I'm going to crush you. Have a Blessed day everyone and as always tell me what you think.

Raven ChibiHeart 3D  Beast Boy Chibi Deadpool icon Clawhauser icon Play-fight 
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I've got to admit, this one did make me laugh more. I like your sense of humor. An original can be improved, changed, etc but it won't be the same. Both stories are unique in their own ways. And I don't think I can choose which story was the beat between two amazing writers, there is certain categories that each would win.
What your story held more of:
•Laughs/funnyness
•Humiliating Raven (it was kinda funny)
•Inclusion of sports
•A bit more fluffy
What the original contained:
•Seriousness
•Beast Boy's playback more torturous
•Used more details rather than dialogue to express the characters feelings
It depends how you would define best. So I guess it's up to you guys to decide who wins...